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Friday, June 1, 2012

Snow in the Basement

I found below a layer of snow;
It is icy cold down there.
Where's our warm winter clothes?
Let's take our shovels down the stairs.

Grab a coat and come to see -
Eighteen snowy inches cloak the floor.
It's summer so how can this be,
That our basement wintered heretofore.

Will you help me dig about?
Come, let's shovel side by side.
This frozenness I must move out
Lest ice expand and winter doth preside.

Each of us has snow within -
A frozen factor we must root-out.
Dance and sing and laugh and love
While we shovel our basements out.

By Julie Dunlap   May 17, 2012

This poem seems like a Dr. Seuss children's poem, and the thought originated from a vivid dream I had right before I awoke one morning.  I jotted down the thought right away lest I forget the idea.  Putting the idea down poetically was challenging in order to incorporate rhythm and rhyme.  I had to get out a rhyming dictionary, a thesaurus, and a college dictionary, and then my helpful editor (my husband) gave me needed critique so I had to reword much of what I had written. It took three days to get from the rough idea to the poem.  It will take longer to get the snow out of the basement, but as we place our trust in God's abiding love, we can have fun as we shovel out the snow.


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